A re-editing job on 'Just obeying orders'
May. 9th, 2019 03:27 pmI don't often give my nearest and dearest the opportunity to read my MFU stories, but I thought he'd be interested in the one I wrote about the Vietnam War.
He made various comments about its structure — he's an Oxford English Lit graduate, so I paid more attention than usual, and I have done some more work on it. If anyone is interested, it's still here, at: